Post by Damian Beoulve on Sept 18, 2004 23:27:49 GMT -5
IC:
I spent most of my life as a test subject. Since the young age of six I was recruited by the Seikyuu to be the test pilot for the ENT - 099 Model. The first MS of it's kind. The one that was first built with the Entity System. All I was to the Seikyuu was nothing. Someone who's sole purpose was to make sure the Entity System was stable for mass production use. To hell the system was stable. It killed eight previous pilots testing on the ENT - 099 Model before me. They all died from severe brain damage and it wall because of that damn Entity System.
It's had a lot of side effects on me as well. I've grown a strong hate for almost everything living. I've also had a strong thirst for combat and killing. Nothing effects me on the battlefield. This is all because of that Entity System in the ENT - 099 Model or what I'll call from now on the Gundam Avatar. Now to get down to telling you about my life to this point...
I was born on AC 212 on Colony L2. Too my parents anyway I showed off an unreal reaction time. Well I lived a normal life all the way up until AC 218.
This year my parents figured to finally get to the bottom of my unreal reaction time. I had quick reflexes so what? This made them suspect me of a Newtype. They just had to take me into get tested at a Seikyuu Lab. Well anyway when they took me in for testing they were right. They were right where they wanted to be wrong. They gave birth to a Newtype. That was when they showed up. They showed up immediatly, almost thirty minutes after my testing was done. They were here to take my away and how much did my parents care? They didn't. They had the news broken to them and they didn't care. Didn't bother them much because I was a Newtype. I was what they thought was dangerous. I was raised to stay away from Newtypes and not listen to anything that I was told about them either. Yet I was one. After my parents left I was plain confused. I wasn't even told I was about to go through intense training, eventully have chips planted into my brain and have to start working with the unstable system known as Entity. Around AC 220 I had the chips planted into my head. They gave me a headband to wear because they thought I'd feel embarssed having plug in's showing from my head when walking around in public. I still wear that thing to this day. Well back to the point. I trained with the Gundam Avatar all the way up until AC 223 came around that corner. This year was a pretty eventful year in my life. July 3rd AC 223 they had graduated me from training and they were all happy because they found someone who did the controlling of the Entity System, rather letting it do the controlling. They only did this because they wanted to see me in the battlefield. The very next day the Seikyuu unvieled their armies. Two days later on July 6th AC 223 they launched a first strike. This day would become known as the Silent Night Massacre. It was also the day I would escape the confinds of the Seikyuu. I figured I'd strike on the day the lab was mostly empty. I went to the hangar to only be stopped from getting to the Gundam Avatar by two guards. They said I might steal it and yeah they guessed right but who cares. I quickly disposed of them because I was trained to be superior to low ranked guards. I proceeded to take the Gundam. When I left the hanger of course I ran into resistiance. Nothing I couldn't handle though. I quickly disposed of eight Mobile Suits with pilot's in them may I add. I escaped without any damage being sustained in the combat that I ran into leaving. I left to space and of course the Seikyuu wanted me back so they were hot on my tail. That was when I decided to leave to Earth. This was on August 28th AC 225 when I dropped to Earth. I had a rough landing but nothing I couldn't handle. Yet my Gundam Avatar had an even rougher one. Luckily I landed around the Seven Cities in which the Nocturne Alliance was organized at. I asked them to fix my Gundam and they agreed too. Suddenly I found myself in a blur almost in their task force. I figured I'd rather be on a side then be a rogue. Well I fought the Shinter of course and was on the battlefield getting my revenge against the Seikyuu remnant. My revenge though will not be complete until the Shinter falls to their doom. In AC 229 another important event happened in my life, of course it's an important event in mostly everyone's lives. The seven cities colony drop. Somehow, someway I lived and I'm still fighting. Of course like I said I won't stop fighting until I gain revenge against the one's who made me this way.
[glow=red,2,300]WEBMASTER COMMENT:[/glow]
I forgot to mention something about the stuff in this action last night because I didn't really look that close at it. Here are a few tips for improvement of this post:
-Eliminate the repetition.
-Fix the years you were born and such; if you were born near AC 100 then you are more than a hundred years old. This would only seem feasible if you were cryogenically frozen.
-It was the Seven Cities Colony Drop. Not seven colony drop.
Other than that it was an ok action, good and sufficient enough for your first post.
Umm sorry about the AC 100 thing....I think maybe it was because I was too tired or something. I don't know. It was at like 1:20 AM or something like that.
I spent most of my life as a test subject. Since the young age of six I was recruited by the Seikyuu to be the test pilot for the ENT - 099 Model. The first MS of it's kind. The one that was first built with the Entity System. All I was to the Seikyuu was nothing. Someone who's sole purpose was to make sure the Entity System was stable for mass production use. To hell the system was stable. It killed eight previous pilots testing on the ENT - 099 Model before me. They all died from severe brain damage and it wall because of that damn Entity System.
It's had a lot of side effects on me as well. I've grown a strong hate for almost everything living. I've also had a strong thirst for combat and killing. Nothing effects me on the battlefield. This is all because of that Entity System in the ENT - 099 Model or what I'll call from now on the Gundam Avatar. Now to get down to telling you about my life to this point...
I was born on AC 212 on Colony L2. Too my parents anyway I showed off an unreal reaction time. Well I lived a normal life all the way up until AC 218.
This year my parents figured to finally get to the bottom of my unreal reaction time. I had quick reflexes so what? This made them suspect me of a Newtype. They just had to take me into get tested at a Seikyuu Lab. Well anyway when they took me in for testing they were right. They were right where they wanted to be wrong. They gave birth to a Newtype. That was when they showed up. They showed up immediatly, almost thirty minutes after my testing was done. They were here to take my away and how much did my parents care? They didn't. They had the news broken to them and they didn't care. Didn't bother them much because I was a Newtype. I was what they thought was dangerous. I was raised to stay away from Newtypes and not listen to anything that I was told about them either. Yet I was one. After my parents left I was plain confused. I wasn't even told I was about to go through intense training, eventully have chips planted into my brain and have to start working with the unstable system known as Entity. Around AC 220 I had the chips planted into my head. They gave me a headband to wear because they thought I'd feel embarssed having plug in's showing from my head when walking around in public. I still wear that thing to this day. Well back to the point. I trained with the Gundam Avatar all the way up until AC 223 came around that corner. This year was a pretty eventful year in my life. July 3rd AC 223 they had graduated me from training and they were all happy because they found someone who did the controlling of the Entity System, rather letting it do the controlling. They only did this because they wanted to see me in the battlefield. The very next day the Seikyuu unvieled their armies. Two days later on July 6th AC 223 they launched a first strike. This day would become known as the Silent Night Massacre. It was also the day I would escape the confinds of the Seikyuu. I figured I'd strike on the day the lab was mostly empty. I went to the hangar to only be stopped from getting to the Gundam Avatar by two guards. They said I might steal it and yeah they guessed right but who cares. I quickly disposed of them because I was trained to be superior to low ranked guards. I proceeded to take the Gundam. When I left the hanger of course I ran into resistiance. Nothing I couldn't handle though. I quickly disposed of eight Mobile Suits with pilot's in them may I add. I escaped without any damage being sustained in the combat that I ran into leaving. I left to space and of course the Seikyuu wanted me back so they were hot on my tail. That was when I decided to leave to Earth. This was on August 28th AC 225 when I dropped to Earth. I had a rough landing but nothing I couldn't handle. Yet my Gundam Avatar had an even rougher one. Luckily I landed around the Seven Cities in which the Nocturne Alliance was organized at. I asked them to fix my Gundam and they agreed too. Suddenly I found myself in a blur almost in their task force. I figured I'd rather be on a side then be a rogue. Well I fought the Shinter of course and was on the battlefield getting my revenge against the Seikyuu remnant. My revenge though will not be complete until the Shinter falls to their doom. In AC 229 another important event happened in my life, of course it's an important event in mostly everyone's lives. The seven cities colony drop. Somehow, someway I lived and I'm still fighting. Of course like I said I won't stop fighting until I gain revenge against the one's who made me this way.
[glow=red,2,300]WEBMASTER COMMENT:[/glow]
I forgot to mention something about the stuff in this action last night because I didn't really look that close at it. Here are a few tips for improvement of this post:
-Eliminate the repetition.
-Fix the years you were born and such; if you were born near AC 100 then you are more than a hundred years old. This would only seem feasible if you were cryogenically frozen.
-It was the Seven Cities Colony Drop. Not seven colony drop.
Other than that it was an ok action, good and sufficient enough for your first post.
Umm sorry about the AC 100 thing....I think maybe it was because I was too tired or something. I don't know. It was at like 1:20 AM or something like that.