Post by Enoch on May 13, 2004 17:20:37 GMT -5
how come you can spell and write normally in the help section, but whenever it comes to writing out what to do for your character, it just plain sucks?
you dotn have to write (said masato) after every thing you say, and it should be in quotation marks, like this:
"Masato! what the H*LL are you doing?, You dont make any sence!", Enoch yelled at him, since nothing made sense at all.
"...", masato was speachless, as usual.
"huh..." (nothing was typed after this dialogue, because the reader knows who is saying it.)
like that, man. make the damn dialogue seperate, and write more than a couple of sentences. plus you cant just (teleport) over to some "home", read the other posts. Gabe, Aimee,silas, saydon, and you, masato, are in a Nocturne Alliance base called Alameda. your in a hallway that is leading to the command center. in front of you are the enemy osiris forces, and behind you is the medical center.
what you should do is start out with dialogue, saying you choice in the matter; whether to help gabe or attack the Osiris.
EX:
"Saydon, i dont know about you, but gabe needs help, and im gonna get him back to the medical center."
then saydon wil say somethig like:
"Whatever man, there are two knocked out people here, man. you cant cary them both, and they will be fine just how they are. I'm gonna get me some Osiris rebel bastards!"
this isnt too hard, just dont teleport to a "home" somewhere outside. you really need to know the situation that your in. read up on posts before this.
"let's go!", said masato
you dotn have to write (said masato) after every thing you say, and it should be in quotation marks, like this:
"Masato! what the H*LL are you doing?, You dont make any sence!", Enoch yelled at him, since nothing made sense at all.
"...", masato was speachless, as usual.
"huh..." (nothing was typed after this dialogue, because the reader knows who is saying it.)
like that, man. make the damn dialogue seperate, and write more than a couple of sentences. plus you cant just (teleport) over to some "home", read the other posts. Gabe, Aimee,silas, saydon, and you, masato, are in a Nocturne Alliance base called Alameda. your in a hallway that is leading to the command center. in front of you are the enemy osiris forces, and behind you is the medical center.
what you should do is start out with dialogue, saying you choice in the matter; whether to help gabe or attack the Osiris.
EX:
"Saydon, i dont know about you, but gabe needs help, and im gonna get him back to the medical center."
then saydon wil say somethig like:
"Whatever man, there are two knocked out people here, man. you cant cary them both, and they will be fine just how they are. I'm gonna get me some Osiris rebel bastards!"
this isnt too hard, just dont teleport to a "home" somewhere outside. you really need to know the situation that your in. read up on posts before this.
"let's go!", said masato