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Post by Enoch on Aug 20, 2004 21:51:50 GMT -5
what ever the new storyline is i doubt that it will be better than this one. well, since im the only one that has read just about every word ever typed since this thign began and actually kept track of it, i woudl kow. and the story is good, but a bit drawn out. it would be nice if we could shrink it or atleast show some good parts. i have the chapters up to halfway through book II.
(were in book III) but so far we havent gotten too far with fixing them up yet with the editing. Gabe, maybe i can edit the storyline down after we get all of the chapters in? when we finish book I ill get down to abridging it.
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Post by Gabriel Fox on Aug 21, 2004 15:51:23 GMT -5
If you want, that will be good considering the length that I am expecting for the final Act. Abridging would be very wise, because a person reading this entire thing would get bored with how much the story incorporates.
I wouldn't start a storyline completely from scratch, it would be more of like building upon the story we have now. Like I said this is all in the future, and right now I don't really have too developed ideas for it.
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